wingwyrm ([info]wingwyrm) wrote in [info]tf2007fun,
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Ficlet

This will make most of you want to kill me. But I had to write it because it came to me and then I couldn't think of anything else. Ficlet. Oh my god. I cried when I wrote this.

I'm sorry for posting this, but... I had to.

Title: Turn and Cry
Rating: Teen (Horribly, HORRIBLY SAD)
Disclaimer: I own nothing.



Ratchet was the first one on the scene as was typical, he was the search and rescue vehicle, but this time was different. This time his first call out was not to the ambulance or to the police or anyone else. His first call was to his oldest friend.

Everyone was at the funeral, Sam and Mikaela, the rest team, the Secretary of Defense. Even Agent Simmons was there. Bumblebee was the one to lower the caskets into the ground while Optimus Prime was the one to give the eulogy.

Years later, even after more Autobots had come to Earth and made it their home with the others, Ironhide was always the one to go to the cemetery. He watched over the human who sat in the lawn in front of the two graves.

And when Will Lennox turned away to hide his tears, Ironhide would always feel a pain in his spark that he had allowed Sarah Lennox to insist that she could take the baby in the car instead.



Sequal here

Be warned: death
Tags: fanfiction 2007 (summer), ironhide (07-08), poster: wingwyrm, rated pg-13 (07-08), will lennox

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[info]rin_x_x

July 15 2007, 02:29:12 UTC 4 years ago

Omg. D:

[info]wingwyrm

July 15 2007, 02:47:12 UTC 4 years ago

I know! I hate myself.

[info]artemischan

July 15 2007, 02:31:28 UTC 4 years ago

Oh god. Very well written, and incredibly sad. Well done.

[info]wingwyrm

July 15 2007, 02:51:16 UTC 4 years ago

Thanks. I was really trying for as sad as possible. I'm... er... glad? that I succeded.

[info]crazy_chitlin

July 15 2007, 02:31:50 UTC 4 years ago

That was good. I didn't expect that coming.

[info]wingwyrm

July 15 2007, 02:52:50 UTC 4 years ago

Thanks.

[info]aprys

July 15 2007, 02:33:43 UTC 4 years ago

This made me tear up D:D:

poor Will and Ironhide D:

[info]wingwyrm

July 15 2007, 02:57:31 UTC 4 years ago

I know! It like a jab in the eye. I should be shot.

[info]liona_skycat

July 15 2007, 02:55:59 UTC 4 years ago

I'll add another D:

Why would you take a flimsy car when you have sturdy, dependable Ironhide? D:

Nicely done.

[info]wingwyrm

July 15 2007, 03:00:23 UTC 4 years ago

I think she didn't want to bother him. Maybe he and Will got home late the night before and she was trying to be nice? Besides, she wasn't there for the battle, she really doesn't *get* how tough Autobots are.

God. Now you are making me want to write another ficlet for this. I don't think I could handle that!

[info]liona_skycat

July 15 2007, 03:07:05 UTC 4 years ago

Shh. Stop contradicting my 20/20 hindsight! Earth logic has nothing to do with this!

... Do eeet!

[info]wingwyrm

July 15 2007, 03:15:14 UTC 4 years ago

SHHHH!!!

Don't tell anyone, I have it started...

[info]liona_skycat

July 15 2007, 03:18:33 UTC 4 years ago

Go peer pressure! :D

[info]cold_poet

July 15 2007, 03:19:53 UTC 4 years ago

I just randomly found this comm and randomly clicked on this fic and...

OW. ow ow ow ow. *is sad*

That was lovely, absolutely beautifully done.

[info]wingwyrm

July 15 2007, 03:24:07 UTC 4 years ago

I'm SORRY! That was probably a bad first impression. Everything else here is pretty happy though! DONT'T LEAVE! *falls to knees and begs* YOU'LL LOVE IT HERE! HONEST!

Thank you for saying it was 'beautifully done'!

[info]cold_poet

July 15 2007, 03:45:41 UTC 4 years ago

Dude, are you kidding me? I am so hooked it's not even funny. You made my heart ache in, what? A hundred words? So cool.

Okay, I'm probably still going "Transformers fic?! O_o" a little bit, but, yeah. Hooked. :D

[info]snarechan

July 15 2007, 03:51:12 UTC 4 years ago

... -wibbles- My eyes leak lubricant now. D: So tender and touching, this work made my heart bleed. Impressive to be sure.

[info]wingwyrm

July 15 2007, 03:56:35 UTC 4 years ago

Thank you. It's so hard to say your welcome when it's for making you cry.

[info]bunny_tofu

July 15 2007, 03:53:41 UTC 4 years ago

*sniffles* oh woobies, I'm bawling my eyes out over here. So beautiful, but so sad D:

[info]wingwyrm

July 15 2007, 03:57:24 UTC 4 years ago

Just go read the next part. You'll cry harder...

[info]mishey22

July 15 2007, 05:37:48 UTC 4 years ago

Wow. That is so sad. It's well written though.

[info]wingwyrm

July 15 2007, 07:12:17 UTC 4 years ago

Thank you. It's a little short for my liking, but it seemed done to me. So. Yeah. I still can't believe I wrote it.

[info]mardigrasmaven

July 15 2007, 07:26:37 UTC 4 years ago

Wow, I totally missed this one... I could've sworn Drink and Cry was first... so this is what started it all. It's so hard to grasp really... :( Poor Lennox

[info]wingwyrm

July 15 2007, 07:31:13 UTC 4 years ago

That's okay. I think I made it so you could just read one and know what's going on and not feel like you're missing anything.

I think...

Anyway! Thank you!
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